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1 Azure Phoenix's Character sheet on Sat Apr 16, 2016 12:30 am

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Basic info
Name: Azure Phoenix
Age: 17
Birthday: 7/26/1998
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 5'6
Weight: 120
Face Claim:from the Rimaru Game site

Stats
STR:3
DEF:2
RES:2
SPT:5
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Major: Dust
Likes:
-Drawing
-killing Grimm
-Dust
-Cats
Dislikes:
 -Grimm
 -Being in the dark
 -Dogs
Fears:
-Losing loved ones
-Being in the dark  
Overall Personality: Azure is a funny yet clumsy boy that seems to make people happy even if they are mad at him. Azure as the tendency to get lost a lot due to his lack direction and just overall forgetfulness which make's everyone a bit angry with him especially people older than him. Azure still has the same mindset before his grandfather's death so he tries not to deal with things that remind him of those times. He always tries not to show people his serious side due to the fact that he's mostly knew for being the happy go lucky kid that is always willing to help everyone no matter the problem. Azure tends to keep important details from people cause he believes that somethings just shouldn't be said.

Abilities
Aura type: Spirit
Aura Color: Sky Blue
Semblance: Glyph- Adds Utility that allows Azure to boost himself making it harder for his foe's to take him down during battle,Azure's Glyph can be expanded or shrank to accompany the number of foes that are on the field during the time.

Item 1: Dust Skates/Ankle Guard/Dust -Teir one wind/A pair of Skates of Blue and Black roller Skates with a Dust spinners on the ankle also have a dust dial attracted to them on the ankle guards of both Skates which are mostly meant for close to mid range combat.

Item 2: Dust: Tier one wind

[History]
Azure was born in a small town in Vale where his Grandfather raised him after his mother died giving birth to him. Azure's grandfather was a retired Huntsmen so whenever he Azure was asked about his days as a Huntsmen he tell him a story that would put him right to sleep. Azure told his grandfather that he would become an even better Huntsmen then his grandfather was but every time he talked about it his grandfather would dismiss it as just another one of his jokes but then after seeing Azure practicing how to use Dust his grandfather took it as him being serious and began to teach him how to use Dust. A few years later Azure began to show much growth in his Dust control but one day his grandfather collapsed during their training sessions. It would only be revealed later on that Azure's grandfather had come down with an extremely rare sickness that left him unable to take care of Azure so he took a job as a delivery boy so he could get his grandfather to proper medicine. A few days later while Azure was on his way back home from work he was attacked by a Beowulf, luckily his grandfather was to move him out the way before it could finish him. Azure wasn't unharmed by the Beowulf's attack its first blow left him with a scar on his back. When came to he saw his grandfather struggling to breathe and to stand so he rushed over to get him back inside the house but by with his wound it was hard to carry someone that weighed more than you. Azure's grandfather last words were for him to keep moving forward no matter what happens in his life. On that Azure had lost the only person that cared for him and the worst part of it all was he died that night in Azure's arms and so after a couple of days Azure took his grandfather's Dust gloves to always have him with him along with his Roller skates to Craftsmen so he could turn them into dust weapons. After all that Azure left his hometown  in order to pursue his dream of becoming a Huntsmen at whatever school would take him but each school that e went to wouldn't take him due to their lack space available and his lack of real field combat also his general unwillingness to follow their rules when it can to fighting and telling the truth about himself. After getting kicked out by nearly every school he went to. One day as he passed through Bellmuse Central he saw a Huntsmen and Huntress fighting off some Grimm and he was just stuck in awe as he watched them take them down with easy, Azure wanted to run up to them to ask where they went to school but on of the townspeople told him that he should go to the Syne Academy if he wants to become a Huntsmen but before they could tell him where it was he Skated off in the opposite direction of the school.

[/RP Sample]
Azure made his way through a ghost as he was on his way to Syne Academy well he hoped that he was going the right way at less "Hello is there anyone that can help me if it's not too much trouble that is?" he shouted standing in the middle of the town but no one answered him well nothing human that is, a group of Ursa's charge at him from behind (Why does it sound like something charging at me?) he thinks to himself as he turns back to see the Ursa's almost on top of him but he quickly Glyph to jump over them allowing him to activate Heavenly Wing and use what his grandfather taught him about Dust. Azure changes the Dust dial to Fire "Okay guys hope you can take a raging inferno."  Azure asks them as skates toward the Ursa's, he jumps and does a split kick sending a fireball at one of the Ursa's setting it ablaze and then Skates around the rest and starts to Freeze them with his until one of them smacks him back "OWWW that hurt! Time to finish this up." Azure gets up and combines his Glyphs for speed and defense in a ring around the rest of the Ursa's. So as he goes around them he throws some Ice and Earth dust into the air and creates a mixture of Ice and earth spears that he drops onto them implying all of them from the head "All done now what back to getting to school." Azure says skating way as if he didn't just finish a fight.



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2 Re: Azure Phoenix's Character sheet on Sun Apr 17, 2016 2:54 am

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Hi i'm Sammey and i'll be looking over this app

ok 1st Your Semblance can't buff and Debuff at the same time for starters and take off the Offensives/Defensives part

2nd you are short 25 words on your Overall Personality it needs to be min 100 words

3rd Your history is short 23 words it needs to be 300 or more

4th the weapons They would need to be more specific on what type of item they are

Oh and on the Stats take off the Brawn, Defense, Resistance, and Spirit things

Bump when done


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Tier 1 Dust: (10x Water) (10x Fire) (10x Earth) (10x Air)
Tier 2 Dust: (10x Fire) (10x Water) (10x Earth) (10x Air) (10x Explosion) (10x Ice) (10x Plant) (10x Thunder)
Tier 3 Dust:(5x Fire) (5x Water) (5x Earth) (5x Ice) (5x Lightning) (5x Light) (5x Shadow)
5x poison
Shadow's Bane
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3 Re: Azure Phoenix's Character sheet on Sun Apr 17, 2016 9:36 pm

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Ok so looking over this app again hmmmm....


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Tier 1 Dust: (10x Water) (10x Fire) (10x Earth) (10x Air)
Tier 2 Dust: (10x Fire) (10x Water) (10x Earth) (10x Air) (10x Explosion) (10x Ice) (10x Plant) (10x Thunder)
Tier 3 Dust:(5x Fire) (5x Water) (5x Earth) (5x Ice) (5x Lightning) (5x Light) (5x Shadow)
5x poison
Shadow's Bane
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4 Re: Azure Phoenix's Character sheet on Mon Apr 18, 2016 12:15 pm

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This app is unapproved
Fix the fallowing
Stats
STR:3
DEF:4
RES:5
SPT:5

Characters have attributes that determine who they are and how they fight, and as students (or sometimes teachers) at a hunter academy, they are probably going to do their fair share of fighting. When creating a character, you get 12 points to put in the four attributes, and each attribute must have a minimum of 1 point put in it. Ratings go from 1 to 5, with 1 being terrible, 3 being ‘average,’ and 5 being amazing.
You have 17 when you can only have up to 12 Stats points

Aura 170|200 HP
you have 300 points to put into them. The default assumption is 150 HP|150 SP. You must place points into these statistics in multiples of 10.
You have 370 when you are to have up to 300 for both

Bump when fixed


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Tier 1 Dust: (10x Water) (10x Fire) (10x Earth) (10x Air)
Tier 2 Dust: (10x Fire) (10x Water) (10x Earth) (10x Air) (10x Explosion) (10x Ice) (10x Plant) (10x Thunder)
Tier 3 Dust:(5x Fire) (5x Water) (5x Earth) (5x Ice) (5x Lightning) (5x Light) (5x Shadow)
5x poison
Shadow's Bane
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5 Re: Azure Phoenix's Character sheet on Mon Apr 18, 2016 1:28 pm

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Bump Fix I hope

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6 Re: Azure Phoenix's Character sheet on Mon Apr 18, 2016 2:20 pm

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ok


Again


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Tier 1 Dust: (10x Water) (10x Fire) (10x Earth) (10x Air)
Tier 2 Dust: (10x Fire) (10x Water) (10x Earth) (10x Air) (10x Explosion) (10x Ice) (10x Plant) (10x Thunder)
Tier 3 Dust:(5x Fire) (5x Water) (5x Earth) (5x Ice) (5x Lightning) (5x Light) (5x Shadow)
5x poison
Shadow's Bane
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7 Re: Azure Phoenix's Character sheet on Wed Apr 20, 2016 1:17 pm

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Removed for sorting items ^^ remember if you do pick armor to specify what kind and maybe do put what is used as your weapon in it's description bump when done


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8 Bump it, twist it,boop it!! on Wed Apr 20, 2016 6:56 pm

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is this good Rich?

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9 Re: Azure Phoenix's Character sheet on Thu Apr 21, 2016 12:13 pm

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It's closer, item 2 is good, remember what I said about dust? If it's not as an item you'll have to get it later, thus you will lack the ranged component on your skates till then if you don't choose to start with dust. You'll be kicking with them and such. Long as you're good with that you're fine save for fixing up the wording on it, the item 1 descriptor still mentions the gloves ^^ Please remove that


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10 Need help fixing it on Thu Apr 21, 2016 1:01 pm

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Could you give me a sample that I could use cause am a bit confused on how to incloud dust on the sheet.

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11 Re: Azure Phoenix's Character sheet on Thu Apr 21, 2016 1:05 pm

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http://www.rwbyrpg.com/t326-richard-lionheart-done?highlight=Richard Like this ^^ Dust counts as one of your two items, you pick one of the starting elements (earth, wind, water and fire) and get ten of that to start. You can however buy all the tier one elements upon picking dust at the start, not doing so means you must pay exp before you do so.


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12 Gonna fix it on Thu Apr 21, 2016 1:11 pm

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So I have to pick one then pay for the rest so I'll go with water then

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13 Re: Azure Phoenix's Character sheet on Thu Apr 21, 2016 1:19 pm

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No, like it is on Richard's apps. It's one of your two starting items. You have access to all the tier one elements in the store but start with ten uses of the element you pick as one of your items ^^


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14 Re: Azure Phoenix's Character sheet on Thu Apr 21, 2016 2:08 pm

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bump

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15 Re: Azure Phoenix's Character sheet on Thu Apr 21, 2016 2:09 pm

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reapproved


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