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1 Steve Brow (Finished) on Wed Apr 20, 2016 2:01 am

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Basic info
Name: Steve Brow
Age: 19
Birthday: 7/26/1996
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus (Rabbit)  
Height: 5'10
Weight: 210 lbs
Face Claim:from the Rimaru Game site

Stats
STR:5
DEF:2
RES:2
SPT:3
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Major: combat
Likes:
-Salads  
-Weapons
-Running
-Taking napes
Dislikes:
-Loud noses
-White Fang
-Kids
-His older brother Jim
Fears:
-Death
-His mother and sisters  
Overall Personality: Steve is a very happy person that likes to help other Faunus that have been abused or abandon due to events that happen in his past. He also has an anger problem which causes him to start fights with people alot but he has a real soft side for his family but namely his sisters and mother. He suffers from multiple Personality disorder so most of the time he's not really in control but his other side Steven how completely disregards every ones feelings  as he puts himself on top of everyone. He also dislikes nearly all women and man but loves himself so much that he checks himself out every 4 seconds to make sure that his hair and ears are in peak condition.

Abilities
Aura type: Power
Aura Color: Yellow
Semblance: Burst-Drive- STR buff that allows Steve to boost his attack when his rage is at it's limits. This causes his hair and ears to turn Pitch black but also cost 10 Aura when used.

Item 1: Ring blade Gauntlets/ Hand and Arm protection / A pair of Bladed Gauntlets..

Item 2: Dust infused Tasset
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[History]
Steve lived in Vacquo but moved to Bellmuse with his family so they could help a relative open a new dust shop which was later reviled to be a lie that he accepted. All the men in his family worked for or the same company but no one would tell him what the company did or why all the men worked and the women didn't, his father explained that the women in the family handle the money in the company which was another lie that his father told him. A few years later when Steve was old enough his father took him and his brothers out to the forest to "train" which was true they did train but their father was training them to kill which made Steve question why they were training like they were. It wasn't till later he found out that his family was part of the White Fang, Steve asked his father and brothers why things couldn't go back to how things were before they moved to Bellmuse but his oldest brother Jim beat him until he was unable to move and this happen anytime he spoke out of line. When Steve turned 19 he tampered with a bomb that was meant to kill some in coming Huntsman and Huntress. After that he tried to leave but was caught by Jim and was thrown into confinement with others that tried to escape. His brother Jim tortured him along with several other members that wanted to leave the White Fang for eight days straight. Steve and some of the other people that he was with made a plane to escape which they succeed in due to that fact that Jim let them go but Steve had to deal with the fact that Jim gave him a  smile he couldn't lose.    

[/RP Sample]
Steve walks into a bar and sits down when he over hears some men and women talking about the White Fang so he stands up and heads over to their table "Hey all the men at this table need to step out side for A moment." he demanded  punching the table and nearly breaking it in half "Don't make me ask me ask twice now get moving!" he shouted as almost undoing his mouth stitches, all the men stood up and went out side like he asked them too "Sorry to bother you lovely lades." Steve tells them as he walks out side the bar to confront the men. One of the men came flying back into the bar while the rest of them were laid out on the gourd, Steve looked up at the girls "Sorry for destroying the bar I'll pay for the damages." he told the people in the bar.



Last edited by Steve Brow on Sun Aug 07, 2016 11:25 pm; edited 5 times in total

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2 Re: Steve Brow (Finished) on Sun Aug 07, 2016 9:23 pm

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Alright, a few tweaks are needed in order for me to approve your app

-Please precise that your Semblance works as a Buff following the Semblance's rules found in this link http://www.rwbyrpg.com/t4-aura-and-semblance-rules

-You cannot start with a weapon that has two forms, you'll need to decide on either the bladed gauntlets or the ring blade

-You can't leave the second item as blank, you need to choose something


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3 Re: Steve Brow (Finished) on Sun Aug 07, 2016 9:53 pm

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BUMP

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4 Re: Steve Brow (Finished) on Sun Aug 07, 2016 9:57 pm

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Alright, you removed the second form of the weapon and added an item......... although the second item has to correspond to either one of the two types of armor or be dust, so unless the mirror is kinda magic and protects you somehow, you'll need another item.

You also didn't specify that your semblance works as a buff semblance


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5 Re: Steve Brow (Finished) on Sun Aug 07, 2016 10:24 pm

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BUMP TO RAGE!!!!!!!!!!!

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6 Re: Steve Brow (Finished) on Sun Aug 07, 2016 10:34 pm

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Alright, so... no need for cooldown on your semblance, you can have it active always, just that for each post it is active to remove 10 aura. Also say that it's a STR buff that gives 2 STR.

Also, you need to choose an element for your dust, can't be all of them. You can choose between fire, water, wind and earth. You also get only ten uses for now (1 use being a post) and you'll need to buy more later.


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7 Re: Steve Brow (Finished) on Sun Aug 07, 2016 11:01 pm

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Okay, so semblance, "Adds Damage" doesn't equal saying it's a STR Buff, you need to add that

And as I said in cb, You can inbue a weapon without the need of an object and directly apply dust on your weapon


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8 Re: Steve Brow (Finished) on Sun Aug 07, 2016 11:29 pm

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All good, approved ^^


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