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1 Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Fri Apr 18, 2014 11:45 am

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Basic info
Name: Jack C. Stroud
Age: 19
Birthday: July 1st
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus
Height: 5'9
Weight: 175


STR: 3


Group: Gadgeteer
Likes: Hunting, Quiet, heights
Dislikes: being too close (Physically) Poor weapon maintenance, Racism
Fears: Being bullied, Running out of bullet's, Death of himself and comrades.

Overall Personality: Jack is a hunter. But not the same kind we are all thinking of. He hunt's his targets down and has a very serious way of doing things out in the field. But back home he is a little quiet but overall friendly. He is very independent and open to helping others. He isn't exactly book smart but you'll want him on your side for surviving the wilderness. He has a lot to learn but that doesn't make him dumb, he is very observant and a great listener. He hasn't been known to crack jokes but he does enjoy them from time to time. He will always be loyal to his leader but he will still try to advise a better strategy if he see's one but he always goes by what he is told he will rarely stray from rules or law.

Aura type: Speed
Aura Color: Light green
Semblance: Wind Manipulation

Defence: At the cost of 10 Aura. Jack can use winds to help him flee from his opponent. Disengaging himself from combat. Jumping to back or off to the side. Winds will assist him gliding him away. (Can only be used once in a post. If used in close proximity with someone else they will move with him. This effect will work on friends or foes.)

Offence: (Wind's Fury) Costs 20 Aura for 20 unresisted damage. a shot that's velocity is increased as heavy winds push it towards desired target. (takes one post to charge Aura for this shot. This shot cannot be effected by UTILITY ability.)

Utility: Can change bullet direction with the use of wind. at the cost of 10 Aura. Of either his shots or his enemies. This is his preferred attack. (only can be used once a post. Can be used defensively or offensively but not both at the same time.)

Item 1: Wraith (20 Rounds) His personal Bolt action sniper. Its and older weapon well maintained but many scratches and minor imperfections show it's seen a lot of combat.Wraith Barrel collapses into itself. More compact and mobile.

Item 2: light armor (no mask) (Physical Defence)

Jack was born and raised as a hunter. A hunter of livestock. His family worked with domesticated animals along with the hunting other creatures that lurked nearby. Jack was the second oldest out of a large family with brothers and sisters. He always worked hard to provide food and money for the family all the extra things he sold at markets. His family lived in a large house that was always growing. His uncles and aunts lived with his family along with their children. Everyone worked fairly hard and it was a fine family unit.
Then recently they were being harassed by humans in the area. with the white fang doing unlawful things, things took a turn for the worse. People started boycotting their wares. Terrible rumors had been spread about his family. Jack was worried for his family he found that many of his friends had left him to the cold. He found himself defending his family from some thugs rather then hunting. Fortunately his father sold the family farm and company to an organization. Jack wasn't happy with this but it was the only way to make the harassment stop. The new owner brought in his own workers and machinery to 'speed' up the work mainly just getting his family out of the work. His father sold the house and everyone took their piece of the pie that they all worked for his family drifted apart.
Jack missed hunting. once he had gotten word about hunter's and huntresses he was eager and willing to sign up. He had lot of skills but he lacked the standard education. But this was his new chapter to his life was to become a true hunter. He worried for his family but he knew he had to live his own life and explore the world.

"Hello, My name is Jack C. Stroud...I'm a hunter who is trying to become a hunter" He chuckled to himself finding the concept amusing. "I'm Just a little quiet I'm used to hunting alone but I am semi socialable. I have a pretty big family so I'm used to having loved ones around me...But recently we've gone our separate ways..." Jack looked down at the floor he seemed somewhat upset after explaining his deteriorated connection with his family. "I'm not really used to this sort of book learning and classroom setup but I'll try my hardest to learn what I can. I'm just used to learning in the field. Studying opponents, watching their movement's and habits" He had a hint of excitement in his last statement he did truly love the hunt. "Sorry I'm just a little nervous and rambling. I normally don't talk to too many people outside family. So maybe I'm not as socialable as I thought..." His eyes diverted away. He spent a moment thinking of what to say next. He re-adjusted his strap that carried his weapon. "So it was nice meeting you. But ill be on my way. Thank you for your time." He said politely with a small bow before walking off. He beat himself up inside feeling like he was an awkward mess when he talked to people.

Last edited by Jack Stroud on Fri Apr 22, 2016 8:21 pm; edited 12 times in total

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2 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Fri Apr 18, 2014 12:48 pm

Hello, I'm Leena and I'll Be Judging you harshly Your mod today~

Personality: you are not meeting to word count here, you are about 50 words short.

Aura: hm, I think you were looking in the wrong place. here is the where the aura types are, it is above the section I think you were looking at.

Items: You can only have one weapon, your other item needs to be either a shield or Dust.

History/RP sample: These are two separate ares here. You need a 300 word history and a 150 word RP sample separately.

Bump when completed~ :D

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3 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Fri Apr 18, 2014 1:18 pm


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4 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Fri Apr 18, 2014 1:26 pm

Okay, Much better. Just a few things.

Item: you do need that second item. either a shield or 5 free posts worth of Fire, Water, Earth, or Air dust.

History/RP sample: These need to be visibly separated, so label one as history and the other as RP sample. History also needs to be 300 words.

bump when edited

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5 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Fri Apr 18, 2014 1:52 pm

hopefully last edit. If there is anything else let me know

Changed semblance. Let me know if it should be changed or not.

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6 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Fri Apr 18, 2014 2:07 pm

Getting there, getting there.

The biggest thing is that starter weapons only get one form, so you cant have the blade there.

Minor thing that you don't really have to edit for: What are you planning on joining? Student, non student? white fang? This isn't your fault, but we have not added this part to the app yet so, ahaha.

new semblance is fine, if its what you want.

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7 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Fri Apr 18, 2014 2:39 pm

Currently non student....but becoming one. change added to the weapon.

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8 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Fri Apr 18, 2014 2:45 pm


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9 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Tue May 27, 2014 7:24 pm


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10 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Sun Apr 17, 2016 11:28 pm

Reopened for updating

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11 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Sun Apr 17, 2016 11:54 pm

I hope everything is alright. Edit is complete

change to height and weight and readjustments to new stat's rule

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12 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Mon Apr 18, 2016 3:15 pm

The way SP (aura) works is more static now, you can only use 20 at any one time. Therefore your semblance would never really use up 50% from one shot.

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13 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Mon Apr 18, 2016 10:58 pm

Adjusted to semblance to 10%

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14 Re: Jack Stroud 'Gadgeteer' on Fri Apr 22, 2016 8:21 pm


"Call me short and your life'll get a whole lot shorter."
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