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1 Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Sun Jun 12, 2016 6:15 pm

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Basic info :
Name: Dum (doom) Prinosyashchiy
Age: 19
Birthday: 6/6
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'7
Weight: 287 LBS
Face Claim: Doom Guy (doom 4)

Stats :
STR: 5+1
DEF: 4
RES: 2
SPT: 1
Aura 100|200 HP

Major: combat major
Likes: silence, fighting a lot of people, his weapon
Dislikes: people, peace protest, and people picking on those's who are weak
Fears: himself, old master, and being weak
Overall Personality: though rarely talks he has a short temper, cold heart and will destroy anything that gets in his way. He never lets others push him mainly because you know his ridicules height and strength. He doesn't care for anyone human, faunus, or andriod he just doesn't like anyone. His size make him hungry a lot but only if he is beaten senseless which is rare for him. He is a rock when i comes to drama, put him in any situation with drama in it and he isn't faced because of it or any thing in that matter just stands there looking at you like a attention seeking child.

Aura type: Power
Aura Color: jet Black
Semblance: electric manipulation i can control electricity
Item 1: arm blade claws (flaming ice storm talons) blade design for three elements but only uses one at a time.
Item 2: Doom bringer armor: Armor made for combat for being physical armor.

History and Sample :

Dum wasn't born into a pampered world he was born then tested on be a cult for many years on his 10th birthday he was already 5'11. The cult be leaved that Dum was a visual  of distraction and would be their puppet until he die's but that was not the case. He broke out of the cult not before taking his weapon the "Flame Ice Storm Talons " or FIST for short and taking his armor as well destroying the cult forever. He also found out what his semblance was as well. Controlling electricity and firing bolts of lightning from his hands he actually had tired himself out and made himself pass out. He then woke in a bed of a Hospital in the city. Not knowing where he was he got his stuff and started to destroy every thing in there. It took ever guard to knock him out but even when they did so he woke up fast and someone stopped him in his tracks and put him in the jail where people like him are put in to not break out. But a the head master of the academy saw how powerful he was and offered him to attend Snye Academy. He thought for a sec and agreed to it and they let Dum go and sent him to the academy. Once Dum arrived he saw faunus for the first time and one of them was being bullied. Dum didn't like how they where treating it so like the titan of a man he is he tackled one of the punks down and just whaled on him. Lets just say this the person he beat the hell out of wasn't going to wake up for a while. After that he went into the airship to actually get to the academy itself but he didn't go on like everyone else he found his way to the top of the ship a rode on the outside.

RP Sample:
RP Sample:
After getting his meal for the day Dum found a opportunity to get out of his jail in which the cult put him in. He saw that one of the  bars where loose and could be pulled out if needed. Instead of waiting he just ripped the cage open and knock the guard out with a single blow cause that's how strong he his. He soon found the armory where he found his weapon and armor. He put on both of the not knowing how to use his semblance yet cause he doesn't know he has it. Cutting all the cults down like a scythe though a field of grass wielded by a strong young Irishman. After a whole 30 mins of cutting down cults he finally found  the exit and left that hell hole for hood. He started to walk to the nearest town where he was but didn't know where he was or where the down is. Even though he was tested on he was very intelligent and used the star's to find his way to a town where he found out what his semblance was and pretty much burn all his energy way and passed out.

Last edited by Dum Prinosyashchiy on Mon Jun 13, 2016 1:46 pm; edited 15 times in total

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2 Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Sun Jun 12, 2016 6:19 pm

Liona Mimiko
History and Sample seem to be missing, please include them in your application

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3 Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Sun Jun 12, 2016 7:03 pm


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4 Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Sun Jun 12, 2016 7:08 pm

Liona Mimiko
Please use the complete Template Code

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5 Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Sun Jun 12, 2016 7:17 pm

am i done now

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6 Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Sun Jun 12, 2016 7:43 pm

Liona Mimiko
Please use the complete template code.

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7 Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Sun Jun 12, 2016 8:06 pm

ok is it good now?

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8 Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Sun Jun 12, 2016 8:46 pm

Liona Mimiko
Item 1 cannot change form like that

I dont like calling things "unbreakable"? @item 2

Also you have some broken codes around personality

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9 Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Sun Jun 12, 2016 11:13 pm

is it ok now

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10 Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Mon Jun 13, 2016 12:10 am

Liona Mimiko
Semblance cant be multielement, please pick one

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11 Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Mon Jun 13, 2016 12:17 am


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12 Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Mon Jun 13, 2016 10:42 am

Leena Lilac
Okay, but now your history doesnt match your semblance

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13 Re: Dum Prinosyashchiy (aka doom) on Sat Mar 11, 2017 5:15 am

Hello there Dum Prinosyashchiy! We see that it's been awhile since you made changes to your application, so the Staff is giving you a seven day notice: should you not make any changes to this app within seven days from this post, it will be moved to the Inactive Apps section.

Sorry for any inconvenience! ^_^

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