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1 Luke Lawless (FINISHED) on Tue Jun 14, 2016 2:22 am

Luke Lawless
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Basic info
Name: Luke Lawless
Age: 18
Birthday: 24/6
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 182 cm
Weight: 73 kg
Face Claim: Lawless (Servamp)

Aura 150|150 HP

Major: Tech
+ Food with a lot of sugar and caffeine: to keep him happy and energetic everyday.
+ Logic/Math: solving math problems keeps him calm and relaxed. Logic makes things more understandable to him.
+ Collecting information and studying: to him, knowledge is power. He always wants to enhance his knowledge, which is why he attends the academy.
+ Money
+ Abstract things: since they can't be calculated or measured, he finds it hard to understand them and therefore despise them.
+ His cowardice: he chooses to run away from his past, even though he knows he has to face it in the end, but now he still doesn't have the courage to do so.
+ Pranks: after what happened to his brother, he hates pranks and might get upset just because of a small one. However, jokes are acceptable to him.
+ Killing people: he values life because once it's lost, it's lost forever. He tries not to kill anyone in battles (he can still kill Grimm). However, he values his life more than that of the others so if he has to, he can still kill people to protect himself.
+ Rules: except from the rules of logic, he hates all kinds of rules. He loves freedom and likes to do what he wants.
+ Revenge: two wrongs don't make a right.
+ His past
+ Loss: he's afraid of losing anything that belongs to him: his life, his property, his memory, his knowledge,...
+ Trusting people
+ Being alone: even though he refuse to admit it, he long for someone to love him and stay be his side.
Overall Personality: Luke is extremely energetic and carefree. He likes interacting with people, though he talks a lot and tends to ignore their ideas. He's also obnoxious and annoying, since he sometimes pokes fun at others and acts childishly. He's an ardent materialist and will do whatever he can to acquire money (except killing people). He is self-centered, stubborn and selfish, he doesn't want to be responsible for anything he had done.
However he can also be serious when necessary, especially when it comes to his inventions. He throws himself wholeheartedly into his work and tries to do as well as he can. He is quite smart and very competent in his work. He gives weird names to his skills and inventions, he also loves giving nicknames to the people he knows.
He cares about people around him though never shows them that he does.

Aura type: Recovery
Aura Color: Black
+ Can-you-feel-the-love-tonight virus (or Virus Infection for short) whenever he joins a battle, a special type of virus is automatically created from his aura. The virus floats within a 15 meters radius and won't be harmful unless he activates his Semblance. When he does, the virus invades his target's body to weaken or slow them down, might give the target a poisoned status. If he doesn't activate his Semblance during the battle, the virus will eliminate itself.

Item 1: [Armor] Cotton candy and strawberry cheesecake: the special black scarf which was given to him when he was young by his parents. He always wears it (even when he sleeps) since it is a remembrance of his family and the sins that he committed. It create an energy field to protect him. He could control it to do small things like grabbing stuffs,...
Item 2: [Weapon] Don't you dare to look down on me or I'll poke you with this awesome sword ("Poky" for short): A rapier with black blade (as you can see in the picture) which he uses for normal combat.
History and Sample
Luke's real name is Luke Karenberg. He was born in Vale. His father was a hunter. His family was not rich, but they were certainly very comfortable. He had a younger brother named Louis. Louis was kind and genuine, he was loved by everyone, especially the girls at school for his musical talents. Even though they always played together, Luke was jealous of him. That was why he tried to prank his brother. He asked Louie to play hide and seek at home. However, after Louie had hidden, Luke went out and played with the other children in the neighborhood instead of finding him. Little did he know that when he was playing happily, his house caught fire and Louie died in the accident. The death of his brother left a deep scar in his heart. He regretted his actions, however he wasn't brave enough to tell his parents the truth about their game of hide-and-seek.

A few months after that incident, his father passed away in a mission, which left Luke shocked and depressed, believing everything was his faults. They family became poor and Luke had to quit school because his mother was sick.

A year later, his mother finally passed away too and Luke had to live in an orphanage. He became paranoia and he isolated himself and his room. He imagined hearing his family's voices, blaming him for their deaths. That was when he took up maths and science, he solved math problems and read books to distract himself from the voices. He was able to went back to school a few months later. Even though the death of his family kept haunting him, he tried to ignore them be pretending to be happy and energetic.

He caught up to his classmates quickly and soon became one of the best students of his school. One of his teachers at school, Mr Haris, who was a former blacksmith, saw the potential in him so he taught him skills and trained him so that he could attend Syne Academy. When Luke graduated, his teacher gave him "Poky" as a gift.

RP Sample:

The weather was gorgeous today, overflowing with generous sunshine and warmth. Luke grinned from ear to ear as he enjoyed his cup of hot coffee in a small cafe. The streets were again teeming with life. Flowers of the season tilted their smiling faces towards the sun. He was supposed be at the academy by now, since he promised his teacher to do so. However, he was too busy browsing through the shops in the city to remember that.

The ringing sound of his phone caught his attention. It was his teacher, Mr Haris, who he referred to as "Santa Claus". He picked up the phone, only to hear an angry voice shouting at him: "How many times have I told you not to arrive late???".

"I'm sorry sir, I was stuck in a traffic jam, it took a lot of time. But I will try to arrive as soon as possible." - Luke said lazily and turned off the phone. He threw it to the side and continued to enjoy his peaceful day in the busy city.

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2 Re: Luke Lawless (FINISHED) on Sat Mar 11, 2017 5:14 am

Hey there Luke Lawless! Wow, this is really well made. I'm sorry it was so glossed over by staff in the past, but as a brand new mod, I'm here to let you know that you only need a few tweaks to get approved.

Exactly what can you debuff? Is it just Strength, just lowering your opponent's Speed Tier? Both? Just need it to be a bit more specific.

Also, we have this awesome new thing called skills, which were introduced much later than your app. YOu must pick a single skill they excel at and a single skill they don't do so well. This current list can be found here, but for future reference it is the topic titled 'Skill List' in the 'Rules and Information' section.

Other than that, you're good to go. Make those edits, and you can be lawless as you want in Bellmuse...well, almost. :P

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