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1 Turquoise Lupus (DONE) on Tue Jun 21, 2016 9:47 pm

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Basic info
Name: Turquoise Lupus
Age: 19
Birthday: 8/7
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus (Fox)
Height: 176 cm
Weight: 72kgs
Face Claim: OC

Aura100|200 HP


Major: Academic

+Technology / Innovation

=White Fang

-Death of Innocents

Overall Personality: Turquoise likes being silent, but he is quick to offer ideas if asked directly. He is content to let others lead in most situations but will quickly and loudly take command if he feels that doing otherwise would jeopardize their mission or the lives of innocents. He's soft spoken, but extremely intelligent, rather liking to quietly solve a problem during a discussion about the problem. This can lead to issues if he does not do what the group asks, but he is far more interested in the results of actions then the means. Turquoise does have a more sinister side to him, and he becomes very malicious and driven if a woman is threatened in some horrendous way. This effect is disturbing to witness, and his own mentor has commented on his almost Bipolar nature due to this attitude.


Aura type: Recovery

Aura Color: Grey

Semblance: (Utility) Turquoise's Semblance makes him unmovable for as long as he can sustain his aura. No outside Force can move him, though effecting something he is touching can move him in relation. ((IE he activates his semblance while sitting on a table, he will not move from that spot on the table but the table can be picked up and moved with him still on it.)) (10 aura per post).

Item 1: Large Riot Shield (T1) - A large riot shield that folds up into Square bracer on his left arm. Turquoise usually uses this in conjunction with his Semblance, in order to make him a wall that will take everything thrown at it. (+10 defense against physical attacks.)

Item 2: Tactical Vest(T1) -A vest infused with dust in the fabric to make it more protective of dust weaponry. Has 24 pockets both visible and hidden, where Turquoise keeps many tools, bandages, and survival rations. (+10 defense against Dust attacks)

History and Sample

Turquoise was born by a faunus mother who suffered at the hands of a human gang late one night. He along with his sister was conceived that wretched night. Their Mother, a religious woman, held on till the both of them were 5 years old, taking multiple jobs in order to feed the lives she had no desire to have, though she adored them greatly. "Should we Thank God only for the goo, in our lives, while ignoring the bad that tempers our souls?" She asked him before a lung infection, brought on by her multiple jobs and lack of money for personal care, claimed her life. Those words would be the most impressionable words of Turquoise's life.

For four years the siblings, he a faunus, her a human, lived on the streets until a White Fang operation claimed his siblings life. Suddenly all alone Turquoise found himself hating the White Fang, but with being a faunus, ostracized by humans as well. Most likely he would have died if not for a retired faunus policeman named Jonathan Blu.

Jonathan taught Turquoise everything he could in regards to combat, teaching him how to use a riot shield effectively when breaching a location was chief among them along with camping and survival techniques, and the maintenance of equipment and vehicles used by the police force. His mentor also helped Turquoise work through the many psychological issues the young boy had acquired in his youth along with helping cement Turquoise's belief that warfare and hatred were not the answer to faunus inequality.

Having finally found some peace of mind, and a mentor to support him, Turquoises now works on helping people. He has found the stories of Hunters, most whom have dealt with faunus on merit rather than history to be the place that he starts his pursuit of a peaceful war.

RP Sample:

"Yeah, Initiation is about to start." a young man responds softly to the screen as he sit against a tree., The leaves cover his light blue hair with speckles of light that seep through there, his light brown skin contrasting with the white undershirt he wore under a black tactical vest, with black cargo pants. Turquoise gives a small smile at the reply from the scroll in his hands as a light blue curved tail ruffles up as the wind blows over it.

He nods at the words his eyes darting to the right as a passerby moves towards Syne Academy the location he will soon be attending daily. He lets go of the scroll with his right hand , as he reaches over and lays it on top of the thick folded metal square that covers his knuckles to past his elbow on his left arm. "Yeah it seems to work with no issue. I was running it through the paces this morning before I left, though we will have to see if a Grimm's claws can slice through it." His emerald eyes jump up to the corner of the screen for a second. "Sorry, I have to go. Take care Mom... look after me." the last part could barely reach his own ears he stops the recording. He places it with the rest of his recorded entries on his scroll before he offers a quick prayer and heads towards the entrance.

Last edited by Talusmouse on Sun Jun 26, 2016 8:27 pm; edited 1 time in total

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2 Re: Turquoise Lupus (DONE) on Sun Jun 26, 2016 8:22 pm

Hi am Sammey and i looked over this app.

Your Overall Personality WC is 93/100 sorry but can you add 7 more words to it.

Ok so on the items can you rid of the +1s on the two items. Add the rating of the Armour x 10 to it.

Bump them done ^-^


Tier 1 Dust: (10x Water) (10x Fire) (10x Earth) (10x Air)
Tier 2 Dust: (10x Fire) (10x Water) (10x Earth) (10x Air) (10x Explosion) (10x Ice) (10x Plant) (10x Thunder)
Tier 3 Dust:(5x Fire) (5x Water) (5x Earth) (5x Ice) (5x Lightning) (5x Light) (5x Shadow)
5x poison
Shadow's Bane
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3 Re: Turquoise Lupus (DONE) on Sun Jun 26, 2016 8:28 pm


Issues addressed... Hopefully *crosses fingers*

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4 Re: Turquoise Lupus (DONE) on Mon Jun 27, 2016 3:29 am

ok looks like you did what i asked just one more thing


Tier 1 Dust: (10x Water) (10x Fire) (10x Earth) (10x Air)
Tier 2 Dust: (10x Fire) (10x Water) (10x Earth) (10x Air) (10x Explosion) (10x Ice) (10x Plant) (10x Thunder)
Tier 3 Dust:(5x Fire) (5x Water) (5x Earth) (5x Ice) (5x Lightning) (5x Light) (5x Shadow)
5x poison
Shadow's Bane
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