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1 Cipher Cam Star on Fri Oct 14, 2016 5:54 pm

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Basic info
Name: Cipher Cam Star
Age: 17
Birthday: 3/18/xxxx
Gender: Male
Race: Android/Cyborg
Height: 5'9
Weight: 134
Face Claim: Rinmaru games

Stats
STR: 3
DEF: 2
RES: 5
SPT: 2
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Major: Undeclared
Likes: Playing games with people, Causing destruction, and Bikes of all kind and Free will
Dislikes: Being told what to do, Joining his father, and damaging his clothes
Fears: Joining his father and losing his free will, confined spaces, powering down for ever
Overall Personality: Cipher's action coincide with his programming which is to stop anyone that tries to overthrow the Atlas powers by any means. He tries his best to make the most of his work in hopes to get approval from his father and co-workers as he doesn't trust anyone but his father and co worker's until he regained his freedom and now he just tries to make up for lost time by acting like a child with a serious temper when things don't go as he would like them to. When he was under his Fathers control he started to develop this habit of making games out of his to make it more fun and to make up for lost time. Along with his game habit he found it hard not to make cause unnecessary damage to the environment around him as if made him releases his pent up anger. Cipher doesn't take being bossed around well as it reminds him of being controlled by his father and just how much he wants to be rid of his past. The reason that he doesn't like to ruin his clothes is because its the only clothes he has and they belonged to his uncle and he just dislikes dirt on him at all times. Cipher is really over confident in his own skills as he will smile while he's fighting his foe but he also has will never someone that is  weaker than him but he is more than willing to take on someone that is far stronger than he is as he likes the rush of fight strong foes without second thought. He also has a soft spot for Flowers namely Lily's as they remind him of his mother.

Abilities
Aura type: Healing
Aura Color: Pale Gold
Semblance: After Light -Utility By creating light images Cipher can use them to take a hit or to block any incoming attacks such as physical attacks and low powered dust based attacks attacks and after they are hit they shatter like glass.
Item 1: 4 Savage Lily/Reinforced skin/Earth, and The 4 Savage Lily are 4 swords  that are connected to Ciphers brain similar to Penny's swords but they don not have handles, the look more like swords without a handle.
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Item 2: X117/Bulletproof plating /Dust, A Stingray shark hybrid with a black lower half and an almost Neon upper body (PlayStation to my Xbox) with light blue camera eyes that.

History and Sample
History:
(300+WC)I was born a very sickly child so he spent most of my days within the confines of a hospital bed just waiting for some to tell me that I doesn't have to worry about getting sick any more but hat didn't stop me my parents from doing what they could to make sure that I was happy. When I was young my mother told me stories about how she was a great Huntress and how she didn't always live in Atlas with my father, at the time I found it to be really exciting as it was all i would ever get when I was in the Hospital. My Father was one of the most leading Scientist in his field which was why I had the best doctors ted to me when I was sick. My Uncle  came to see me nearly every weekend and when he came over he would take me out and play in his Airship but one tome when he we went to play I came down with a fever and passed out on the way to the ship and my father forbid my uncle from being near me unless he or a guard was with him. My mother didn't like to say home to often but when she did I felt safe and protected, more than i did when it was just me and my father.
On the day of My parents vow renewal, I was well enough to ride with my mother and Uncle Prota to meet up with my father at Park were they first meat when a rocket hit us. I woke up to the sounds of people screaming in fear at what just happen so I went to look for my mother and uncle throw the wreckage but nearly 70% of my body was damaged so I used the last bit of my strength to call out for my father before sum-coming to my injuries. When I remember seeing someone take me out the wreckage and placing me by a patch of Lily's before my father the Ambulances cam and took me to the hospital were they placed me on life support that was before my father came and wised me away to his lab where he told me that this was the only way to save my life. The prorogue was painful and did more damage than good but when he finished I felt like something was missing. My father told me that both my Uncle and mother died and that I was the only one that made it out but something told me that he was leaving something out. Six months later my father enlisted me into one of his programs to help me get use to my body moving again,It wasn't until a week after I joined that I found out exactly what my father did to save me. When i confronted him about my new body he quickly called him guards to restrain me so he could finish making the perfect son, I tried to fight back but it was too late as he placed an eye-patch over my right eye and activated something called the Son Program that pushed my subcontinent to the back of my mind so he could have full control of him and once he did he started sending me on these deadly missions to delete anyone that would become a threat to Atlas.Soon I would be placed in the Atlas private core where only the elite could join so they could tackle the harder more complicated missions. During my first mission with them we had come across a horde of Beowulfs that have been gathering for some time and when we arrived they attacked the Airsship before we could land I was thrown out to clear a landing zone and while I fought to make the landing zone I started to lose control of my Swords and called for back up but they said their was jamming so they arrived when I had dispatched with the last Beowulf but I had sustained a massive damage to my back and was unable to continue the mission so I was left in the Airship with the group Medic who everyone called Tricky, she was a blond haired women that smelled like a candy shop and when she saw my face she did her best to cover her own. while we were on the ship she made several comments on my age and over and over again but I didn't  have time to give her a reply as she questioned my I had a inhibitor on, I didn't know what she was talking so I asked her why she doesn't help the rest of the team but she simply smiled at me and placed her hand on my eye-patch which made me blush a little and then a rush of electricity went throughout my body which sacred her so much that she blamed this inhibitor but I still didn't understand exactly what she was talking about.  

When we arrived back in HQ my father called me in for an upgrade buy when I walked into his office he told me to lay on the table and relax as he attached weirs to my eye-patch and put in to sleep, When every am put to sleep I get to relive the days before the present but this time was different it was like I was being ripped out of my mind and when I awoke my father informed me that he finished the upgrade and that now I should be more effective in battle. After a few more missions with the Atlas Core I became my fathers personal servant and lost all connections with everyone that I worked with. One day someone broke into my room and stole something that my father was keeping hidden in my room so he sent me on a mission to retrieve it so my mission started in the main locations that criminals would be likely to hid but my search was in vain as they were not in any location in Atlas. My father tracked it's location to a small island that made him extremely angry and sent me to go chace after them immediately and I  head for my Airship a girl with Blond hair that smelled of candy came to adjust eye-patch and told me that she was happy to see that I could still feel emotions, I blushed a little as she finished up and fro some reason it felt like I knew her from someplace but everything started to feel hazy. When I felt for my mission I fell into a deep sleep which caused my Airship to crash in the Kingdom of Bellmuse the same place my mother was born and the place that I would find the stolen item fro my father.  

RP Sample:
Cipher pulled off his eye-patch and summoned his eight swords to his side and "What is this feeling?" he asked himself as he sent two of his swords into a Ursa and runs away when into his air ship and looks for the crew when a Nevermore lands on the ship, crushing it and throwing him back into a river knocking him unconscious until an hour later when he wakes up in a small room as his system's came back online he felt as if he had just woken up for the first time. "What happen? Who's home is this?" Cipher asked as he he heard foot steeps enter the room "Yello their my young friend glade to see you up and running" a  young man around his mid twenties says wiping oil from his face "Did you repair me or did my father send you cuz if you did am not going back!" he shouted as he back himself into the corner getting ready to call his swords to him when the man takes a photo out of his jumpsuit chest pocket showing Cipher of himself, Ciphers father, and a baby Cipher back in the lab. Cipher started to calm down and made his way to the man "Uncle Prota buut I don't understand he,he said you died with my mother in the crash all those years ago." he whimpered as his Uncle hugs him tightly "Am so sorry for what Cipher my brotha did to ya when the car was hit panicked and looked for you and ya mother but when I found her she could only tell me to get you to safety so I did   .



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2 Re: Cipher Cam Star on Sun Oct 16, 2016 10:18 pm

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Hi Sammey is looking over this app and it looks good but it needs some fixing

Weapon: 8 Savage Lily/Reinforced skin/Earth, and The 8 Savage Lily are 8 swords that are connected to Ciphers brain similar to Penny's swords but they don not have handles, the look more like swords without a handle. This is a little over powered so fix it to 4 MAX!!!!

Bumd when done :3


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Tier 1 Dust: (10x Water) (10x Fire) (10x Earth) (10x Air)
Tier 2 Dust: (10x Fire) (10x Water) (10x Earth) (10x Air) (10x Explosion) (10x Ice) (10x Plant) (10x Thunder)
5x poison
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3 Re: Cipher Cam Star on Sun Oct 16, 2016 10:35 pm

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Tier 1 Dust: (10x Water) (10x Fire) (10x Earth) (10x Air)
Tier 2 Dust: (10x Fire) (10x Water) (10x Earth) (10x Air) (10x Explosion) (10x Ice) (10x Plant) (10x Thunder)
5x poison
Shadow's Bane
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4 Re: Cipher Cam Star on Wed Nov 02, 2016 10:53 am

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15 is too young
Can you explain you semblance a little more? I dont see how creating light allows you to teleport

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5 Re: Cipher Cam Star on Sat Nov 05, 2016 2:37 pm

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I do hope it make more since to you now Leena Lilac

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6 Re: Cipher Cam Star on Sat Nov 05, 2016 2:48 pm

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16 is also too young, and is there any way to word your semblance to make it less of an illusion semblance? "To trick foes into attacking them" is the bit that concerns me.

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7 Re: Cipher Cam Star on Sat Nov 05, 2016 3:01 pm

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Would bating them into it work better or should I just get ride of that part?

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8 Re: Cipher Cam Star on Sat Nov 05, 2016 3:10 pm

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That would work better yes

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9 Re: Cipher Cam Star on Sat Nov 05, 2016 6:36 pm

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10 Re: Cipher Cam Star on Sat Mar 11, 2017 3:03 am

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Hey there Cipher Cam Star! I know it's been a long while since your app was looked at, and I apologize for the wait. It seems your app is almost finished, but I have an issue.

For your second item, it seems that your description wasn't quite finished. As the only items you can start with are Weapon, Physical Armor, Magical Armor, and Dust...I'm a bit confused on what we are looking at here. What exactly is the stingshark...sharkray? Sharkray. Is it armor, hence the bulletproof, or is it Dust?

After you touch up that item a bit, I'd say you are all good to go! ^_^

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