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1 Roy Fox (Finished) on Wed Dec 28, 2016 5:40 am

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Name: Roy fox 
Age: 18
Birthday: 7/18
Gender: male
Race: human
Height: 5'11
Weight: 137 lbs
Face Claim: Toma- Amnesia

RES: 5
Aura 150|150 HP 

Likes: the color orange, 
Dislikes:the color pink
People who mistake him for a Faunas(due to his last name) 
Hair brushes.
Fears: Death
Loss of friends
Being helpless
Overall Personality: Roy Fox Is what you would call a free spirit, he is always got a smile on his face and is often thought of as lazy. He is also a very sarcastic individual making jokes left and right and taunting his opponents even in the heat of battle. However under that mask of sarcasm and laziness is a young man who is very protective of those he cares about to the point of even being considered suicidal. He is easily annoyed and often accidentally thought to be a faunas(due to his last name and hair), overall he is a very laid back and sarcastic individual who careers deeply about his friends. 

Skillful at: Cooking
Lacking skills in: Tactics

Aura type: Spirit
Aura Color: Orange
Semblance: Static- Accelerates the rate and amount of static electricity that  is created through friction .this can be used for a multitude of purposes such as wiping electronics or even acting as a makeshift defibrillator.
Item 1: Katana- a long Japanese sword whose sheath has a flame design embroiled on it. 
Item 2: Dust resistant Trenchcoat- A trenchcoat that provides moderate dust protection but little to no physical protection.
History and Sample
.    Roy T. Fox was an orphan at birth being left on the cold streets of a village named Basil with the only form of Comfort and warmth  being a trenchcoat wrapped around his body with the name Roy embroiled on it. Having no purpose, goals or expectations to live up to or any form of love he simply drifted through life without a care in the world and in the process gaining a lazy and uncaring attitude when he was around the  age of 4 he was soon unwillingly thrown into an only faunas orphanage  the locals mistook the young Roy for a faunas due to his unnaturally wild hair, and their stereotypes of most faunas being poor a couple long years of imprisionment and being freindless Roy was adopted by a family of Fox faunas whose last names were ironically the foxes. He lived in peace and finally found himself a place where he belonged, but still stuck out like a sore thumb until the age of 15, where tragedy struck, after his father refused to help the white fang by making a secret trade route through the city. They invaded the town indiscriminately killing all-whether it be human of faunas, they razed houses to the ground with their dust, and took all the faunas children away to become members of their cruel organization but in the wake of all this as the burning house roy was hiding in collapsed he was pushed out of the way by his adoptive father but in the wake of this his fathers legs were crushed knowing he couldn't go on,and was going to die anyway he gave his family's blade to roy and told him to run and live without looking back, and with a heavy heart and a katana in hand roy ran and ran till he couldn't run any more after that he worked as a mercenary for the next couple of years doing odd jobs from espionage to simple duels he even did baby sitting once in a while and in those year he vowed to never let someone close to him die ever again for the next couple of years Roy led a pretty steady life until receiving a strange Invitation.....          

RP Sample:
It was a beautiful day outside birds were singing, flowers were blooming and our protagonist Roy had just  woken up from his happy slumber looking up towards the sun from the roof he was sleeping on. "Yo sun do you have to be so bright!" "Oh wait.... You do."
Roy said with a deadpan expression."Are you Roy Fox?" A strange mailman said to him from the ground. "Yes I am what's up?" "You have mail." He said while tossing me a strangely sealed package. Roy being Roy decided to open it up only to find a strange looking device inside it was like a metal rod with a shiny red button on top of it he pressed it without hesitance only to see a giant flare released into the air. As it dissipated I could hear rumbling and suddenly a horde of angry shopkeepers came running around the corner toward his position. "You ain't getting away this time Roy!"  "This is going to be a long day" Roy said while dashing off into the distance.

Last edited by Roy Fox on Sat Dec 31, 2016 1:32 am; edited 1 time in total

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2 Re: Roy Fox (Finished) on Wed Dec 28, 2016 9:03 am

Hey, welcome to the site. This is a great app but there are a couple probelms ^^ The first is that you have 12 stat points, not counting the additional 1 granted by your aura type. Your current total is only nine.

Next is that, while you can make your coat "dust resistant" or "physical resistant" you can't have a coat that reduces damage from just flanes, nor any single element.

The final thing is that you do not make the word count on your history, please increase this to at least 300. Bump when done, you're almost there ^^

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3 Re: Roy Fox (Finished) on Sat Dec 31, 2016 1:33 am


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4 Re: Roy Fox (Finished) on Sat Dec 31, 2016 7:16 am

Approved ^^

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