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1 Amari Kell [Done] on Fri Jan 06, 2017 1:54 pm

Amari Kell
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Basic info
Name: Amari Kell
Age: 19
Birthday: May 5th
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus
Face Claim:Leonardo Watch|Blood Blockade Battlefront

Aura 150|150 HP

Major: Dust
Likes: Music, Human Culture, Anything Edible
Dislikes: Guns, Bad Music, Silence
Fears: Thunder, Lightning, Spiders
Talent: Persuasion, Speech, Music
Overall Personality: Amari is a social butterfly. He loves to meet new people and make new relationships. He tries to be involved in everything as much as possible. Although this might not be the best plan of action, Amari has a certain….difficulty seeing the consequences in his actions. This makes for some very snap decisions on his part. He is mostly laid back but is very serious when the time calls for it. Although he has a lot of friends, he is very selective about who he allows close to him. There are things that he’ll tell anyone, and things he’ll only tell close friends.

Aura type: (See the Aura and Semblance Rules to know the types.)
Aura Color: (up to you)
Semblance: Secondary Soul-The user has control over a somewhat limited substance, said substance's origin being unknown and being the same color as the user's aura. The user can use this substance as a method of attack or defense by forming it into an object, but the objects are limited due to the substance being limited. This substance takes the form of a small floating ball when not in use, but despite its appearance, it's actually rather heavy due to the fact that all of its mass is directed towards a single point.
Item 1: Chēn no kama- Two dual scythes, connected to chains, connected to gaunlets
Item 2: Chain Gauntlets- Golden Gauntlets that store the chains for Amari's dual scythes

History and Sample
Wonderfully average. The story of my life. I wasn’t extraordinary. I wasn’t special. I had the normal two parents and was an only child. When I was a kid I had all the dreams of any child. To be...awesome. To be great. The greatest things around were hunters. They were everything I ever wanted to be. Strong. Brave. Amazing. But of course, I was a kid. Those dreams disappeared as soon as they manifested. Then I took up music and became class president of my class, and head of the cooking club. I had a lot of time to work on my skills. My dreams of being a hunter were almost dashed. Almost. After walking home from school I caught a glimpse of a hunter running across the rooftops. It wasn’t something incredibly spectacular but it was enough. Because in that moment, I remembered the greatness of hunters. The reasons why I wanted to become one in the first place. So I decided to go to Syne Academy. But of course, every good hunter has equally good weapons. I spent night and day working on my weapon. My first idea were blades to throw at enemies, but I realized that knives were too small, so I decided to make dual scythes. I still wanted the throwing aspects so I added chains to the scythes and connected them to a pair of golden gauntlets that stored the excess chain in the gauntlets. I worked tirelessly working on these weapons and it was a great thing when they were finally finished, too bad I was too tired to celebrate. But I was there. Above expectations. Syne is supposed to be amazing. So I wanted to be ready. To be as extraordinary as Syne itself.
RP Sample:
“Mother,” Amari choked out, “I’m pretty sure I need to be alive if I want to attend Syne!” Amari’s mother let him out of the death chokehold she called a hug, “I’m sorry honey. I just can’t believe my baby is going to be out there all alone in the real world!” Amari’s dad looked up from his newspaper. “It’s not like he’s going to war, Alice. He’ll be fine out there on his own.” Amari’s mom started bawling over her only kid leaving for University. In the midst of all the distraction Amari slowly backed out the door to sneak a ride to Syne. “They won’t notice I left,” He said uncertainly, “Totally.”

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2 Re: Amari Kell [Done] on Sat Jan 07, 2017 8:40 am

Richard Lionheart
Hey welcome to the site ^^ Alright on a glance there are a few problems with this app. You have not inculded an aura type or colour, your app also lacks the skills section. You are supposed to include one thing from the list you are good at and one you are bad at, no more.

You have also not hit the required 300 words for your history nor 150 for your rp sample.

Also, could you please specify your faunus trait(s) as your fc seems to lack any clear ones ^^ Just put it next to his race.

Bump when done.

"Call me short and your life'll get a whole lot shorter."
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3 Re: Amari Kell [Done] on Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:43 pm

Hello there Amari Kell! We see that it's been awhile since you made changes to your application, so the Staff is giving you a seven day notice: should you not make any changes to this app within seven days from this post, it will be moved to the Inactive Apps section.

Sorry for any inconvenience! ^_^

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