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1 Takumen Hiori on Wed Jun 28, 2017 9:59 am

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Name: Takumen Hiori
Age: 21
Birthday: January, 7th.
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'4.5"
Weight: 265lbs.
Face Claim: Papyrus (humanized)

Aura 120|180 HP

Major: Combat
Likes: Enjoys spending time with his friends and family, Only the finest cuisine, and sparring with an equal.
Dislikes: Sugary drinks, Pranks, bad puns.
Fears: The loss of those closest to him, rejection, caves.
Talent: armor smithing
Weakness dust refining
Overall Personality: Takumen Hiori often appears naive to the evils of the world, shaking off bullies and threats like the people didn't even mean them. In reality he's closed himself off to the idea that people could be evil at all, instead choosing to believe in each and everyone of them. He sees there actions and words as misguided and attempts to correct them. He often takes the side of the downtrodden, the underdog, the looser and will defend them till the end. However should anyone or thing hurt someone he cares for there would be a reckoning unlike any they have ever faced.

Aura type: Defense
Aura Color: Green
Semblance: Stand Against (buff): Takumen envelopes an ally in his green aura, shielding them from physical blows. (+2 defense)

Item 1: Shield Spear: A weapon primarily focused on defense, it is a kite shield with cylinder at the center and a small spike at the bottom. the spike extends out 1'5" when a button on the handle is pressed thanks to a spring lock mechanism.

Item 2: Brass Armor (physical): A full set, minus the helm, of Brass armor worn by the knights of old as they battle grimm. Has been modernized slightly and retooled to suit Takumen Hiori.

History and Sample
Takumen Hiori was born in a small farming village. He had aspirations of joining the huntsmen since he was a small child but his father had always squashed the notion.

"we are farmers, always have been always will be." He told him over and over again. Still it was all Takumen wanted, recognition, fame, heroic poses! He trained his body day and night becoming stronger and faster. His father disapproved but couldn't stop his son from trying.

It was in the winter of his thirteenth year that Takumen got his wish. He was off training in the woods near his families home when he heard a cry followed by an animistic roar. Fear gripped him for a few moments before common sense failed him and he rushed headfirst towards the sound. There he found a man backed against a wall with nothing but a dagger, in front of him was a large Grimm shaped like a bear. The mans arm was bleeding and lying a few feet away was a shield. without hesitation Takumen picked the shield up and rushed the monster bashing it on the hindquarters with the shield.

The creature turned and swiped at Takumen shattering the shield and sending him flying. When he awoke he was at home with a bandage around his head. The man was sitting by the fire talking to his father. Noticing that Takumen had finally woken up the man walked over and knelt down next to him.

"How would you like to go to beacon next year?" The man asked, smiling.
Takumen looked away, "I can't... we are farmers, always have been always will be..." He whispered. "To hell with farming" He heard his father shout. Surprised Takumen looked at his father. "you're not a farmer, no matter how hard i tried to protect you from the world, you rushed headlong into it. Might as well be prepared for whats coming." He said as he hugged his son.
RP Sample:
"Takumen Hiori will you please, WAKE UP" The teacher shouted as the class began to laugh and giggle. Picking his head up immediately Takumen blurted out, "10" as the answer to the question on grimm biology.

"Takumen the question was which Grimm is depicted here on the screen." A picture of a large flying Grimm fills the screen. "Griffon" Takumen answers confidently. "correct, glad to see sleeping through my class isn't affecting your grades." The teacher comments before continuing on with the lecture.

"thanks..." Takumen whispers to the person sitting next to him. They had wrote out the answer on a piece of paper and slid it to Takumen while the teachers back was turned. "No problem, this teacher is a bit of a hard ass sometimes" He replied before turning back to listen to the lecture. Takumen, meanwhile, returned to his daydreams thinking of home and his father. Wondering if one day he'd make him truly proud.

Last edited by Taku on Thu Jun 29, 2017 8:22 pm; edited 1 time in total

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2 Re: Takumen Hiori on Thu Jun 29, 2017 2:25 pm

Lloyd Vanheim
Hi, I'll be grading your app

First off: Paps' best skelebro, that's all

Second: You can't both give aura and a buff with your semblance, it would need to be one of the two, so either for 30 SP you give someone 20 (can't be equal amount) or a +2 to DEF

Third: Please specify the type of damage your armor protects against (Physical or Dus)

Note that while your weapon has a shield attached to it, it doesn't give you any bonus

Bumb when the changes are made


"Memories should be the only things to preserve in our lives, because in the end, they're the last things we can hold on to."

"If anything goes wrong, I blame Oli..."
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3 Re: Takumen Hiori on Thu Jun 29, 2017 8:22 pm


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4 Re: Takumen Hiori on Thu Jun 29, 2017 8:29 pm

Lloyd Vanheim
All's good, share that spaghetti with the world my friend!


"Memories should be the only things to preserve in our lives, because in the end, they're the last things we can hold on to."

"If anything goes wrong, I blame Oli..."
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