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1 Vanilla Evans(Complete) on Thu Sep 21, 2017 3:37 pm

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Name: Vanilla Evans
Age: 17
Birthday: 4/20
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 125lbs
Face Claim: Rean Schwarzer

STR: 5(6)
DEF: 2
RES: 2
SPT: 3
Aura 200|100 HP

Major: Combat
Likes: Fighting, Napping, Cooking
Dislikes: Grimm, Waking Up, Paperwork
Fears: Acrophobia(Heights), Bacillophobia(Microbes), Cynophobia(Dogs/Rabies)
Talent: Stealth
Weakness Musician
Overall Personality: Vanilla is a kind individual to those that know him, he is fairly quiet. To those that know him well, he is extremely lazy and doesn't want to do much outside of reading or napping. This however changes when combat situations arise. Vanilla turns serious and fairly energetic, some believe that he has a split personality, but nay, this is all one person. He is vicious and strikes silently without mercy. He prefers to end combat quickly, but relishes in it. He loves the dance of fighting, but is still fairly quiet throughout fighting. He does not believe in taunting the opponent, nor does he believe in hearing them out. All he sees is someone or something to defeat.

Aura type: Power
Aura Color: Dark Purple
Semblance: Umbra Weld- Vanilla has the ability to manipulate the very shadows themselves. Vanilla can use this semblance to attack, defend, debuff, and utility. The form of this semblance takes the form of delving into the shadows themselves for spying, and creating constructs out of shadows.

Spikes: Vanilla exerts control over his own or the opponents' shadow(s) in order to generate spikes that erupt suddenly from the shadow in order to injure or attempt to injure the opponent.

Shuriken: Vanilla controls his shadow to create Shuriken he can launch or throw at the opponent.

Spheres: Vanilla controls his shadow to create spheres he can launch at the opponent.

Barriers: Exerting control over his own shadow, Vanilla is able to make the shadow erupt to form a barrier in between him and an attack to lessen the damage done to him.

Dummies: Exerting control over the shadows in his environment, Vanilla is able to create dummies of himself in order to attempt to fool opponents into attacking them instead of himself. The coloration of these dummies are still like that of shadows, however these were created to trick the less intelligent(Grimm, some people) into attacking these instead of Vanilla.

Binding Tendrils(Speed): Controlling the shadow of his opponent, the user is able to control the shadow to create tendrils made out of shadow in order to bind the opponent's legs in an attempt to stop them or at the very least slow them down.

Shadow Diving: Creating a space within a shadow, Vanilla is able to dive into the shadow and stay there in order to recoup his stamina or spy upon someone. He can still be attacked by those that know he is within the shadow in question. When inside a mobile shadow, Vanilla cannot maintain this for long. Nor can he maintain this for long with a constantly changing light source.

Riding on top of Shadows: Creating a platform from his own shadow, Vanilla is able to use it to quicken his travel speed without exerting his physical limbs.

Item 1: Tachi-The blade is 31 inches long.(T1 weapon)
Item 2: Leather coat(T1 armor)

History and Sample
Once upon a time, a boy was born to a couple of huntsmen. This boy's name was lost to the rivers of time and amnesia however. This boy's early life was simple, he traveled the world with his parents while they did their jobs. He would be left with the villages while the boy's parents fought the Grimm. He was a loved young boy, and had spent his early years in happiness. Until one fateful mission where his parents were completely overwhelmed by the amount of Grimm were present. The village proper was overrun by the Grimm hoard as well, leaving only a couple survivors. It seemed as though the survivors would be killed until a flash appeared in the air.

The flash was a swarm of knives that appeared out of nowhere. The hoard was reduced to nothing as strangers appeared from the shadows. They took the villagers to their hidden complex, it appeared as though the strangers knew that the hoard was advancing on the village. They arrived too late to help the village. Upon happening upon the amnesiatic boy, the strangers bestowed upon him a name. The last name of his father, but they gave him a new name. Vanilla, a color of white. A blank canvas to draw upon. They let the survivors live in safety within the complex, but requested the payment of training the children. The survivors allowed this due to having nothing left. They wanted vengeance upon what had happened.

And so, the now proclaimed Ninja raised and trained the children to be lethal fighters. The years passed, as the adults trained the children and raised them to be proud ninja. They had activated his aura, like they do all children straight out of basic training which ended upon the childrens' 10th birthday in most cases. The clan continued to train the children, now preteens and teenagers and allowed them to choose what path they would take. Most wanted to remain in the clan, but not Vanilla.

Vanilla wanted to leave the compound. The young man wanted to know where he had come from, who his parents were, what they saw, what he had seen. The young man wanted to explore the world like he had done in his younger years, that much at the very least he knew of his past. What he had heard from the villagers, his parents let him travel with them. But this, this was not enough for the young man. Leaving the clan with permission from the head of the clan, Vanilla donned traveling gear and the blade that was gifted to him from his foster parent.

Stepping into the world for the first time in years, Vanilla traveled towards a small island nation that he had heard that his parents were from. The Huntsmen Academy on the island was where they had met, and where they had become Huntsmen. It was the beginning of their journey. And so, it would be the beginning of his new life, his journey.
RP Sample:
He was finally there, the man donned in a white trench coat with dark clothing underneath was finally there. He was looking upon the Syne Academy, the place where his parents had begun their journey. Vanilla had a small smile on his face, as the young man walked through the halls. He had to find the admissions office, but that would prove hard. Vanilla had never been inside the building nor has he seen any maps before entering. Looking at the walls, and other decorations for some sort of map, the ebony haired man walked through the halls.

When he finally stopped, he found that he was inside the astronomy tower. It was official, he had a terrible sense of direction. Sighing, he turned and started to look for a professor, or at least a student to show him the way to the office. This was going to be a long day for the secret ninja, he just knew it.

Last edited by Vanilla Evans on Fri Sep 22, 2017 4:06 pm; edited 5 times in total

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2 Re: Vanilla Evans(Complete) on Thu Sep 21, 2017 7:11 pm

Alright most of this is fine however your semblance most certainly needs more details in places. For starters you've talked about manipulating shadows but not actually making constructs out of them? You should specify that this is the form your manipulation takes. Without that specification it could be that you're just moving shadows on the ground bud ^^

While the simple things such as barriers and spikes make sense enough on their own without in-depth explanation you've stated "Power Armour" with no further explanation as to what that is well as mentioning a "Field of Darkness" and saying it can debuff without specifying what it is (I myself do not think it would be possible to debuff str or spt with shadow constructs , as vision does not account for damage, and suggest removing it but feel free to try describing it ^^)

You also need to describe how you dive into shadows, I would recommend changing this from a bullet list to a couple brief paragraphs bud ^^

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3 Re: Vanilla Evans(Complete) on Thu Sep 21, 2017 7:47 pm

I think I fixed all of your concerns. If not, then I can change it more. I want to make this semblance work on the site, and if it's unworkable, I'll create something else for Vanilla.

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4 Re: Vanilla Evans(Complete) on Fri Sep 22, 2017 10:12 am

Alright ^^ that's a great bit better bud but there is just two more things, I thought the dummies were just an alternate form of "Barrier" listed however the use for fooling is confusing me a bit. They would still be shadow coloured, they wouldn't match your character's colouration. I guess at night that would make them more useful than in the daytime for this reason? Regardless please make the colouration clear ^^ And, I believe this is the last thing, is to remember our conversation on shadow diving in the discord ^^ I recommend adding a little phrasing to make it clear that, due to the movement of shadows, remaining hidden while in the shadow of a mobile object or person is difficult to maintain and pending the light source location cannot be done. Bump when done.

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5 Re: Vanilla Evans(Complete) on Fri Sep 22, 2017 12:37 pm

The changes have been made

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6 Re: Vanilla Evans(Complete) on Fri Sep 22, 2017 4:12 pm


"Call me short and your life'll get a whole lot shorter."
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