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1 Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Mon Aug 04, 2014 6:05 pm

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Basic info
Name:: Sidono Carref
Age: 19
Birthday: August 15
Gender: Male
Race: Faunus
Height: 6'5"
Weight: 156lbs
Face Claim: (Not from anime, came from photobucket)

Stats
STR: 5
DEF: 1
SPT: 5
RES: 1
Speed Average
Aura 200|100 HP

Personality
Major: Tech
Likes: Running laps, Sparring, Reading, Listing to music
Dislikes: Slow people, Long lines, Mis-matched clothes
Fears: Dogs, Hospital needles, Crowds of people
Talent Robotics
Weakness Social Interaction

Overall Personality:
Sidono usually keeps to himself most of the time. But when he actually talks to people he makes some good friends that last. He hates when people don't have matching clothes when they are around him, he is very OCD when it comes to that sort of thing. Because of this he spends just about an hour trying to make sure everything he is wearing actually matches. He is usually silent and only gives an occasional nod or grunt. He hates talking and feels like it is something he shouldn't have to waste his time doing, even when he is asked a question he just writes down what he was going to say. However, when it comes to robots, androids, and cybernetic limbs he geeks out and gets lost in thought as to how it was made. He tries to apply this knowledge and what he learned from the White Fang to improve any and all technology that he can.

Abilities
Aura type: Healing
Aura Color: Purple
Semblance: Utility - His semblance allows him to teleport a short distance in any direction. Visual cues include his eyes glowing an eerie purple color and his right ear to twitch twice. It seems like a great semblance, however, it puts a large amount of strain on his body. So his body is frail compared to other people.
Item 1: Obitus, a double sided scythe, its name means "Last Day" in Latin
Item 2: Full physical armor coverage on his right arm-(colored black and white on the edges)

History and Sample

History:

Sidono grew up in the White fang with his mother and father, a happy and complete childhood to him. The only drawback was the fact that he was White Fang his whole life. His father was not well liked in the human race, but was well respected in the White fang as one of the top spies in their history even though he was a human. Still, none of the hate that most people suffered got to him. He even taught Sidono all he knew about cybernetics and robotics which laid down Sidono's love of anything dealing with robotics. He even helped out with his semblance training. That is until Sidono's father had a sudden change of heart. He said that the humans were only misguided and scared of them, he was a wimp. He left and disappeared.

With he was old enough, Sidono became a spy like his father and went on missions even his father wouldn't do. Sidono continued to tinker with robotics a t his own pace to try to help other members get either robotic enhancements or artificial limbs. Now that the White Fang were "causing problems", around the time he was 13, Sidono was subject to even worship and was considered a hero at his young age. Still, he bore his ears in shame because of his father, he was not a coward like his father was. Over the years, The faunus child's mother had taken back her maiden name of Carref, and decided that she wanted to be the type of Faunus who would actually help her son any way she can. So she suggested that he should be assigned a new mission. One that involved him to go to the school as a regular child but inform The White Fang on their future plans that they had.


RP Sample:

Sidono was soon drifting asleep after a long day filled with more paper than he thought was possible. Very soon he was dreaming on how he was entered into this school. "Sidono, it is time." His commander was very lean and fit at that time so he thought that he was more like a general. "Alright." Sidono was very excited about this new assignment and just wanted to show it in a manner that was new to him, by speaking. But this dream soon turned sour, because of this he woke up with a fright and his weapon drawn. Sidono then thought to himself, "I really wish I stopped having this dream." And on that note he then continued to work on his paper. While he was working his White Fang communicater went off, "Hey is this a good time?" Sidono then answered, "No this is a perfect time. What do you want?" He then heard what he had to do and went off into the hall looking for his new target.



Last edited by Sidono Carref on Thu Jul 20, 2017 12:18 am; edited 25 times in total (Reason for editing : Face Claim)

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2 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Wed Aug 06, 2014 4:37 am

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Hi, I'm Leena and I'll be your mod today~

I't's a good app, but the RP sample has less than 150 words. Please fix this and you'll be good to go!

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3 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Wed Aug 06, 2014 1:44 pm

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Ok fixed it

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4 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Wed Aug 06, 2014 11:31 pm

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Alright, In the double check, I notice that you need to add more of a description as to what your semblance does, as opposed to one word. Such as what are the visual cues? What stat does the semblance buff? So on and so forth.

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5 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Fri Aug 08, 2014 12:56 pm

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Got it done

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6 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Sat Aug 09, 2014 3:28 am

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Approved!

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7 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Fri May 19, 2017 12:49 pm

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Moved for edits by request.

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8 Gotta bump on Wed May 31, 2017 9:59 pm

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Bumped for someone to finally see this.

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9 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Tue Jun 06, 2017 8:01 am

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Alright, these edits are fine for the most part but there are a couple of minor problems. First is that "Groups" as they are listed here are no longer a thing. They have instead been replaced by "Majors" based on what the student would be studying at Syne. The equivalent to gadgeteer now is the "Tech" Major. Second is that you have not specified the armour type of your armour, physical or dust resistant. Finally and I did have to dig into the rules to make sure of this while you could summon your rat in tandem with a vial of poison, purchasable in the back-ally, summons cannot inherently have an element or status effect coupled to them at all times. Bump when done ^^


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10 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Sat Jun 10, 2017 10:10 am

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Bumped

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11 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Tue Jun 13, 2017 11:23 am

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Alright so this new semblance confuses me a little, semblance is supposed to be a manifestation of one's aura and such; coming from the person yet from what I can tell across your history and in the summon itself you've worded it as if you made the droid almost as if it were a kind of weapon or the like? I don't understand how you're summoning this or using your aura for this is all when it seems like it's a physical thing you made by hand? Bump when further explained or replaced?


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12 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Sun Jul 16, 2017 4:55 am

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Fixed a couple of things. Now I should be done.

BUMPED!!

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13 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Tue Jul 18, 2017 10:28 am

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One thing wrong ^^ History is not the 300 words. Almost there


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14 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Wed Jul 19, 2017 12:05 am

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Bumped again.

I think I finally have it all done.

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15 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Wed Jul 19, 2017 1:32 pm

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Alright and just noticed this ^^ll keep forgetting things since it's been so long, you do need to put the image of your fc on the app. at the top


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16 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Thu Jul 20, 2017 12:15 am

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I just noticed it as well, my fc was up there. Now I have no idea what happened to it. That is just great.

Well I at least had it in a spare file and remember where I got it from.

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17 Re: Sidono Carref (Fixed) on Thu Jul 20, 2017 10:32 am

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