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1 Azuli Diam(Done) on Tue Jan 09, 2018 5:05 pm

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Basic info
Name: Azuli Lapis Diam
Age: 19 years old
Birthday: October 10th
Gender: Female
Race: Faunus(snow leopard tail her ears are fake clip on ears.)
Weight:125 lbs
Face Claim:N/A it is a drawing I requested from Nagiekkun39 on deviantart for my character Azuli

RES:1 +1
Aura 160|140 HP

Major:Dust Major(She is going for specialized hunter with dust)
-She loves to make friends(secretly if asked she doesn't admit it)
- weapons
-She has a huge dislike for anyone who looks down on others
- She doesn't like snakes
- She doesn't like rainy days
Arachnophobia (fear of spiders)
Claustrophobia(fear of small spaces or closed in small spaces)
Autophobia(fear of being abandoned)
Talent: Fighting
Weakness Loremaster/writer
Overall Personality:
Azuli is known to have a harder exterior she'll to shield her emotions from others,if she so chose to. She uses it only to make an impression on others.She is brave, loyal,and willing to do what is needed for the greater good. Though if you got to know her ,she isn't as bad as she tries to make herself seem.  Those close to her know she is a rather kind,caring young woman. She would lay her life down for those she is close with and would protect them to her last breathe. She is what one would call someone who hides under a mask. In a way she does.

Aura type: Resistance
Aura Color: a light ice blue
Semblance: Azuli's semblance is what she likes to call absolute speed but it's just a speed buff. She likes to use it in cases of rare moments of battle where its close to her losing. As she uses it she uses dust(earth Dust) to form a sort of exact image of herself ,but not colored like her,being as it is an earth dust she is using it would be brown like earth, as she uses her semblance to run using the dust image as a sort of distraction.
Item 1:
A  scythe(made for her by her father) The scythe base color is a light violet with splashes of light blue and white.
Item 2:
A container holding earth Dust. The container itself is a white color. It is easily able to attack to her scythe. It can also attach to the light blue band at her hip(pants).

History and Sample

Paragraphs 1:How Azuli came to be:
Azuli was born one early fall morning in Menagerie,to the cheftain ,of a small tribe of snow leopard Faunus, daughter Syllia Diam and her husband Rorick Flint. Syllia had met Rorick one summer day when her father sent her out for some groceries. When they met they had instantly hit it off and day after day the two met. One day Syllia had started to leave to go meet Rorick when the chieftain,her father, forbid her from doing so. She had left anyways running away with him. Leaving Menagerie Syllia and Rorick disguised themselves and moved to living in Vale. This was where Azuli was born.

Paragraph 2: Azuli's Childhood;
Since she was born she was raised in Vale til the age of eight years old. Her childhood was like any other of course her parents used to dress her to hide her ears with a big light blue bow on her head and would put her in a puffy skirt to hide her tail when she was younger. One day about 6 days after her birthday she was brought back to Menagerie with the sudden death of her grandfather,the chieftain. She was then allowed to dress how she wanted in Menagerie. She made friends and lost some.

Paragraph 3: Azuli's teen years:
Turning 12,Azuli left to attend school always wanting to be a huntress since the first one she saw. She left going to Vale to live with a friend she had made in Vale who knew she was a Faunus. Before she left to attend Signal her father had crafted a weapon for her giving it to her as a farewell gift. Azuli was so happy with it she had took it greatfully and left to attend school.  Skip ahead to when she was 18 she had finally finished at signal and had thoughts of attending beacon but decided to travel finding herself at Syne where she applied to Syne Academy. She attend a at Syn now and has high hopes of graduating and becoming the best Huntress she can despite being a faunus.
RP Sample:
It was early morning as a white haired beauty grabbed a single bag and folded her scythe to it's sword and sheathed it. Today was the day she made her first appearance at Syne Academy. She didn't think she would ever attend another academy besides Beacon but here she was. She opened the wooden door her snow leopard ear flicking at the breeze that assaulted her face. Her tail whistling behind her she started her walk ,her light blue tennis shoes, crunching the fallen leaves under them. Azuli let out a small breathe letting the facade of her tough exterior take shape. She adjusted the navy blue spiked armlets on her arms and blew her hair from her face.With a small smirk, she reached the building ,where her training to be the best huntress would begin. She would not fail not this time. She would do her and her parents proud. Letting out a breathe her violet eyes looked up"Let's get the started" she said to herself.

Last edited by AzuliDiam on Fri Jan 12, 2018 8:25 pm; edited 5 times in total

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2 Re: Azuli Diam(Done) on Wed Jan 10, 2018 10:45 pm

Dunno if this allowed. I will triple read the rules(read twice already) and make sure but I have finished Azuli.

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3 Re: Azuli Diam(Done) on Fri Jan 12, 2018 11:56 am

Hey ^^ Couple things to sort bud; first is that you start with a single form to your weapon rather than multiple. As you upgrade your weapon you gain multiple forms.

Second is that when it comes to dust you only start with one type on your person, ten posts worth of said type. If you want to specify how you use it and hold it in this thread you can but you'd only specify a single type here ^^ by taking it you can buy all tier 1 dust types from the store though so don't worry.

Also you have both a fear and a dislike of being alone, these are too similar so you'll have to add an additional entry to one of the two lists which does not connect directly to another in your likes/dislikes/fears. ^^ Bump when done

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4 Re: Azuli Diam(Done) on Fri Jan 12, 2018 12:20 pm

Bump :) fixed it I just changed the fear to rainy days because she it makes her ears and tail damp and she hates that. Hope that's fine

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5 Re: Azuli Diam(Done) on Fri Jan 12, 2018 7:12 pm

Ah good, that's all fine now! I have noticed one additional thing about your FC however. Faunus traits are limited to one per faunus, as is the case in the show, but to get around that (as we have done with others in the past) you can take one as your trait and state the other to be something you wear like say a false tail attached to your trousers or a small hairband which has your ears on it. Just specify your real trait next to your race ^^

One last thing is just in regards to your history, you say your parents were "Chieftains" denoting a position of power in Menagerie. What I'd like you to do is add the likes of "To a small sect of faunus" or the like, acting as almost a spiritual leader, to that rather than implying a huge place in the government of Menagerie when we don't really know a whole lot about how it's government works ^^

Bump when done.

"Call me short and your life'll get a whole lot shorter."
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6 Re: Azuli Diam(Done) on Fri Jan 12, 2018 7:29 pm

Fixed saying she has a tail ears are just a clip on lol. Though regarding her history it was her grandparents her mother's parents whom were cheiftan not Azuli's parents. Her parents just live there as civilians they didn't take over.

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7 Re: Azuli Diam(Done) on Fri Jan 12, 2018 7:34 pm

Thanks bud and with the chieftain stuff; We don't want people having like direct relations to canon in the same way as we wouldn't let someone be say Qrow's fifth cousin or the likes ^^ If you put "Chieftain to a small group" or "Chieftain to a specific sect of faunus" regardless of how far removed it is then I can approve it because it does make it that step smaller/more disconnected from the direct canon bud ^^ As far as we know Ghira has been the only "Chieftain" and we don't know if that's like a new thing for menagerie or the likes so doing that removes such a problem ^^

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8 Re: Azuli Diam(Done) on Fri Jan 12, 2018 7:39 pm

Alright,yeah I see what you mean now. Sorry,lol. Anyways I fixed it as part of the first paragraph of her history.

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9 Re: Azuli Diam(Done) on Fri Jan 12, 2018 8:39 pm


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