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1 Quill Darwind (2nd Re amp) on Sat Feb 17, 2018 12:43 am

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Basic info
Name: Quill "Frost" Darwind
Age: 24
Birthday: 1/25
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'0 with suit, 5'10 without suit
Weight: 312 LBS with suit on, 165 LBS without
Face Claim: warframe operator from Warframe

Stats
STR: 5
DEF: 5
RES:1
SPT:1
Aura 100|200 HP

Personality
Major: Civilian
Likes: His job, his family, and his dog
Dislikes: Argumentative people, bandit, and whitefang
Fears: Loosing self, death, and Failure to protect
Talent: Combat
Weakness Smithing
Overall Personality: Though the suit it self doesn't show any emotions outside of it Quill is a pretty lay back guy, he stays away from any action when he is not operating his suit or in a non combat zone. He normally keeps to people he knows and likes, like his wife who operates her own suit. He stays quiet through out most his jobs only keeping a channel open to speak with any of his friends or love ones while on a mission/job. He also keeps his word to finish a job without killing himself, as long as he gets his money he is fine with the path he takes.

Abilities
Aura type: Strength
Aura Color: Blue
Semblance: Frost: This semblance is all ice based.
(Damage) This semblance attacks in three ways
Snow Ball: Launching a small ice bomb that cause damage within 5 meters
Ice Wave: Sends a wave of razor sharp crystallized ice towards an enemy (Range 10 meters)
Avalanche: Summons large chunks of ice to slam down on enemies with in 10 meters.
(Defense) The user can spawn a large 10 meter dome of protection them self and their group.
(Utility) This semblance can also create items from ice and even ramps/bridges as well.

Item 1: Slash and Stab: A pair of folding blades, the one in the primary hand is called Slash because of how Quill fights by stabbing the secondary one in a person gut then slashing their necks open with the primary one. (Physical)

Weapon:

Item 2: Frost frame: A suit that is design for combat and to wear all the time, the colors of the suit can be change if needed for customization. This suit was design to invoke fear into the enemy when it appears.(Physical)

Armor:


History and Sample
History:
Quill was born into a clan of nomadic mercenaries called the Pack. This group has different divisions, Quill belongs to the Cold division. This group mainly contain heavy armored ice users that deal with defense type missions. By age 6 Quill was put into training, he trained like all the other trainees, he then meet someone he would soon make a special bond with a girl from the Metal division, a division that deals with metal or energy formed weapons, this division also deals with offensive type missions. By age 12 he had finished his training and was assigned a team, the team had the girl he meet as a trainees and 2 others from Flare division. The team was well off with the equipment they had but Quill enjoyed melee combat more then the others which was normal for members of the Ice division to do so. By the age of 15 the Quill and the girl were dating and the team was ranked 6th in the Pack, they held that title until they disbanded like most teams do. A year later they had teamed up once again to do some looting on some abandon settlements that hasn't been looted yet, they mostly found jewelry and old tech but it was still worth something, Quill did keep one of the jewelry. By age 19 Quill had purposed to the girl and was married at the age of 20. They did have a wedding but only a small amount of people were invited, mostly good friends and commanders, after that the honeymoon. After all that 4 years has passed and Quill was sent to the remote island of Belmuse to act as a hired gun for a while, Quill found this boring and didn't want to be there but back home with his wife.
RP Sample:
Quill was walking thought a town on the main land when some bandits tried to mug him, by now we all know this song and dance. Quill kick their butts,
they run off screaming "We will get you for this" then are never seen again and Quill has heard this hundreds of times when he was younger. At less back then they actually came back and tried to fight him again, but bandits now a days just are all bark and not bite. It was sad that Quill couldn't have a fight that fun anymore, because he is now married and his wife doesn't want him to go fight everyone he sees like he did when he was a teen. So he asked the C.O.'s if he could be put into a position where he can still fight people but not break his divisions code of hire. So the put him in a position as a hire muscle in a remote island called Belmuse, he accept and was set up with a warp system in his suit.



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2 Re: Quill Darwind (2nd Re amp) on Sat Feb 17, 2018 4:31 pm

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Couple things bud, first of all as I DMed you; you should put your character's actual face and body in the FC bit. Put your armour in as you did your weapon Next, when it comes to dislikes you've put two groups which seem to fall under the category of enemies for your characters and "Enemies" in general. I recommend either getting rid of enemies and adding one dislike or keeping it and adding two (That way enemies would have examples in bandits and white fang)

Next you have not specified armour type and the wording on the latter thing the suit can do ("The suit is also connected to a system that allows the user to travel back and forth the suit it self and to his home base, the suit stays where it is until the operator returns to it.") Is a bit confusing, I can't tell what you mean. Bump when done


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3 Re: Quill Darwind (2nd Re amp) on Sat Feb 17, 2018 4:56 pm

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4 Re: Quill Darwind (2nd Re amp) on Sun Feb 18, 2018 10:09 am

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Okay couple of things now ^^ First of all your fc listing is still what it was prior, thus I assume it is incorrectly sourced? Please rectify this. Second with your armour you have now not included it's appearance, thus what it covers. Just put a spoiler with the image as you did for your first item ^^ Bump when done.


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5 Re: Quill Darwind (2nd Re amp) on Sun Feb 18, 2018 1:09 pm

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6 Re: Quill Darwind (2nd Re amp) on Mon Feb 19, 2018 5:52 pm

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