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1 Luka Valentine (finished) on Fri Feb 21, 2014 5:00 am

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Name: Luka Valentine
Age: 25
Birthday: 11/11
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Height: 6 feet even
Weight: 130lbs
Face Claim: Urada Oikawa - Seikon no Qwaser

Stats
STR: 3
AGT: 3
SPD: 3
SPT: 3
Aura 150|150 HP

Personality
Group: Teacher
Likes:

  • Helping others (both human and Faunus)
  • Cute bras/panties
  • Bi/Lesbian women like herself
  • Sweets
  • Being the school nurse
  • Singing

Dislikes:

  • People (and Faunus) being hurt
  • Not having something (or someone) to cuddle at night
  • Grimms
  • Having her bras/panties ruined

Fears:

  • Being unable to help others
  • Losing her position as nurse
  • Being beaten by a Grimm

Overall Personality: Luka’s personality has changed quite a bit since she first attended Syne Academy but in many ways remains the same. To start she is generally a warm hearted and kind person making her great for the position of school nurse. She’s polite and at times soft spoken but is a very fun loving and happy person. However her years as a student fighting Grimm has made her a tough and powerful huntress and that’s become a noticeable aspect of her personality. As a teacher this comes in handy as even though she attempts to make her classes fun and entertaining it allows her to show her students how she doesn’t tolerate problems or wild behaviors with just a glance.


Abilities
Aura type: Healing
Aura Color: Silver
Semblance: Allows Luka to transfer her aura. This is usually used to transfer her aura into others as a way of "quick healing" them in the field. This takes 30 points of Luka's aura and adds an extra 20 points to her target's aura.
Item 1: (Weapon) A scythe with a 6 foot staff and a 5 foot blade. The special trick of the scythe is that it uses batteries installed in the upper and lower portions of the staff to generate a large energy blade over the scythe's blade. This blade actually extends the reach of the scythe's blade and acts as one giant edge.
Item 2: (Dust) Level 1 Water

History and Sample
History:
Luka’s childhood was a normal enough one. Considering both of her parents were female. This didn’t really matter to her though considering both of her mothers loved her and made the three of them a more than happy family. It was when she was still young that she found her love for helping people, often this resulted in her just running around town for her parents or family friends that needed things done. It was a on a random day that she was off playing by herself in some woods beyond her house that she met another girl, this one with a fox like tail and ears. The girl was pinned under a fallen tree trunk and was unable to get herself out.

Her good-natured ways caused Luka to come to the girl’s aid despite her appearance. Managing to lift the tree just enough for the girl to slide out, with the girl’s help, she watched as the fox girl ran off after stopping to give her a look back over her shoulder. Even though she didn’t get a thank you or anything Luka was happy she managed to help someone out of such a dangerous position. It was a couple of years later that Luka encountered the fox girl again in the woods. This time the girl, about the same age as Luka now, actually approached her and spoke. She introduced herself as Urada and thanked Luka for her help saving her those few years back. The two girls spent the rest of the day talking and spending time together. Eventually Urada had to return to her family and Luka had to return home as well.

Unfortunately that was the last that Luka saw of Urada for a while. Soon was enrolled into school and even sooner sent off to Syne Academy with the hopes of becoming a school nurse for the academy. Upon entrance to the academy she received her scythe from her parents as a parting gift, as they knew she would need it since they themselves had attended Syne Academy as children. After enough time and studying Luka managed to graduate from Syne but decided to stay at the academy as the school nurse, a position she had been wanting since she arrived at the school as a student.

RP Sample:
The bell rang out through the halls of Syne Academy, signaling that classes were about to start. For most students however anyway. For one busty, purple haired student it signaled the start of her shift in the nurse’s office. Arisa ran through the corridors while pulling a white coat on over her arms. That was one of the perks about having become the nurse’s assistant as just a simple first year student, it gave her one or two free periods without classes so that she could actually do her work. The other perk was getting to see all the lovely ladies the academy housed, all of them ranging from first years to teachers, in their underwear or less. It was also a good way for her to screen potential girlfriends. Here she was, 19 years old and never had a girlfriend. She had followed in her parents’ footsteps and ended up attracted to women rather than men after all.



Last edited by Arisa on Mon Dec 01, 2014 6:35 pm; edited 4 times in total

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2 Re: Luka Valentine (finished) on Fri Feb 21, 2014 5:20 am

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Moderator Eli here to look over your App today!

Semblance: You don't have to find the parts to make stuff with your semblance, as it is using your own aura to fuel it's abilities. Unless that ability is matter conversion or something like that. If you are converting matter, you might want to state what the components can be. Also, the upgrades only beef up peoples weapons to add half of your current corresponding weapon or shield's level to theirs. (For balancing and stating's sake) So for example, you have a tier 3 weapon when you upgrade another person's weapon you'll give them +10 aura damage for their weapon.

Scythe: The witch hunter attack that you are using cannot use Aura to power it, as that would be related to a Semblance type attack. If you want it to be an Aura related attack you gotta find a way to relate it to your semblance. Otherwise you will have to find a way to either give it a different power source, or scrap it. Also the damage values for this attack should be the same as the damage values for the weapon normally if not semblance related, but it would make sense for it to extend the scythe's attack range. ; )

Bump once you have made the necessary changes.

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3 Re: Luka Valentine (finished) on Fri Feb 21, 2014 6:24 pm

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*bumps up the jam*

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4 Re: Luka Valentine (finished) on Fri Feb 21, 2014 6:36 pm

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5 Re: Luka Valentine (finished) on Sun Nov 30, 2014 3:33 pm

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Bumping this cause changes were made and it's now complete

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6 Re: Luka Valentine (finished) on Mon Dec 01, 2014 5:09 am

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Just a couple of things, I didn't see which group you were in the proper location, and though it was stated elsewhere I would like you to add it for later reference.

Secondly Your semblance requires the calculation of 25% of your aura and that get's into decimals and that's no fun. I would just change it to cost the same as a healing aura 30 aura for 20 recovered. This way it would also be cheaper than it would previously.

Bump once the proper changes are made.

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7 Re: Luka Valentine (finished) on Mon Dec 01, 2014 6:36 pm

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Bumping for fixes

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8 Re: Luka Valentine (finished) on Tue Dec 02, 2014 7:44 am

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One last thing once you are approved I will have Leena change your username to Luka Valentine, and you will use that name to log in once the change is made.

Otherwise well done. Approved!

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9 Re: Luka Valentine (finished) on Sun Jun 21, 2015 11:04 pm

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THIS CHARACTER HAS BEEN REMOVED AND ARCHIVED UPON PLAYER'S REQUEST!

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